Script doctoring

Boy is your script in bad shape!

Please don’t cry, there’s a lot you can do.

What you need is:

  1. get a fresh take on things
  2. gather new ideas
  3. clean up that structure
  4. pimp up these sentences

Hard? Yes it is!

Impossible? No, it’s not.

I’ll hold your hand and together we’ll drive to the end of the canyon and… fly!


Thelma and Louise's car flying over the canyon